As I scanned, I saw that there were less periods per paragraph that it looks like it was a single sentence.It can be fixed. Also there are upper cased letter in the middle of a sentence.The grammar is not all over the place. No errors and was smooth to read.The story is about an overpowered God who choose to be incarnated in his juniors creation. So if you like overpowered mc with a drop of sexy stuff this is your cup of tea.
I like the new edge to the store. It’s a great start to a great story. I like the first half and am looking forward to seeing how this side of the store turns out.
Hope it would be good till now only four novel of Same genere let me to pay money and time reading them(Lord empire,world online,sword of dawn breaker and release that witch)
I love how you started the novel. It seemed a lot more interesting. And I especially liked your synopsis—short and concise. Keep up the good work, author!
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