The Awakened Blader

loved the recent chapters, can't wait for more updates.

Hi I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted and you left me wanting more and more ! so when I realize that such masterpiece didn’t have a review I was shocked! So I’m here to show my appreciation to your work ! Please continue with your hard work ! That being said... Writing Quality: it’s pretty good, I didn’t notice any big mistakes in your grammar. For me it was very fluid, I read all 40 chapters in one go and  I never felt tired ! I enjoyed reading it and that’s the most important thing for me. Updating Stability: I can't say much about it, so I’ll trust you and give you 5 stars. Please continue to update frequently! Story Development: I say it’s a good rhythm, not so slow but not so fast, until now you pretty much followed the original rhythm of the manga which is good for me. Although I felt like the MC should do more physical training, like sparing with tang or something like that, for what you write it seems that he just do some heavy work out and meditate but that alone doesn’t give him experience on real battle. Until now that wasn’t a problem because he never encountered anyone who was stronger than him in real fight ( I’m not counting the exam to enter Shrek Academy, because if the professor had take it seriously, Joy would lose ). Other than that I notice that the MC try hard to not change the original events, which I can understand, but that can become very boring in the future, until now that’s not a problem because it still just in the beginning of the plot. Overall I’m loving it ! Character Design: I have nothing to say about it, l pretty much see him as Aizen before betraying Soul Society, I didn’t paid too much attention to his description so I can’t say much, I’m sorry ! World Background: I recently started reading Doulou Dalu, I didn’t finished so I can say much. However I thought it was clever the idea of using the infinity stones as material soul ! MCU it’s not my forte, although I watched the movies I was never a die hard fan of the comics. For now that’s all I can give you, I’ll do another review in the future. I hope it was helpful!I’m sorry I can’t give you a more detailed review, I’m usually to shy to Write anything, this is my first review ever T^T   Obs: please take in consideration that English it’s not my native language so I apologize for any mistakes

To who ever wrote that «18+  warning» up there I say :1# no one give a sh*t .2# thanks for the encouragement to read this .3# already reading it .

Hey it’s an ok story, to me nothing really stand out on this on ,, it’s your usual novel about mc cause of not awakening power get bullied and somewhere down the line somehow he is gonna awaken his power and probably get an op beast  and take revenge on the one who bullied him..    update schedule that’s a 3 cause 10 days go by with no update so it’s random... chapter length are really short like 9 page of nothing so far 25 chapter nothing really happens in the story....  it’s your average book you can read to pass the time if you have nothing serious to read....  the title of the book ruthless dragon god hey if you wait long enough for around 500 chapter  which is gonna be around 2028 cause of slow update,  MC might become one...

my second and last review as an author for Biohuman... Man, I gotta say, its's such an honor to write something I've been ruminating on for years! Biohuman is finally ended and if you haven't read all of it or are waiting for it to finish, go and read! Now that I'm done with the book I can say characters are great. I like making relatable characters, different dynamics and putting them in a world not so different to ours.  Lee Seng may not be the BEST character, but who isn't perfect? It's a slow read and the free chapters will really allow you to either push through it or not. Writing, in my opinion, does get better .there are mistakes as my eyes cannot see everything 😭 but I tried my best to write something interesting. Definitely potential for me to come back and explore the world, but for now... Thanks for supporting me! Follow me on Instagram and Twitter @reiverus_ You'll see what I'm up to and eventually another story will happen.

This is good so far... the plot is interesting and there are a lot of questions both from Damien old and new world. Seeing the tags, I think I know where this story going to be.Looking forward for it.

first time i see something so bad in my life, all this story doenst seem to have any sense the didnt give anything out he is so plain sadly...........

The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters.Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest.Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!