The Average Man's Life

Whenever the MC makes a choice between two decisions, strangely I can't read them. Thank you to those who commented what they were supposed to say in the comments for those who couldn't read them. If you're wondering what I'm talking about, just read and you'll find out. Or hopefully, they'll have fixed that the time you read this review.MC rerolls his cultivation potential until he gets top notch potential. He then joins a sect, goes on the down low and occasionally does a few high profile things while still trying to be low-key. Some people have also commented that he's stupid sometimes, but so what? Does the MC have to be perfect to enjoy the story?The novel isn't bad. The MC uses a sword, so if you have some strange prejudice against swords (this has barely any impact on the plot anyway), you can skip it. Otherwise, if you really can't find anything better, this novel is fine to read until the very end.

It starts off good, but as the story progresses it becomes a *** fantasy rather than kingdom building and politics it was supposed to be. Like there are more than 3 chaps in a row, dedicated entirely to ***, but having more than one chapter simply to give more description of the MC-s territory seems to be too much of a task. It gives that Japanese virgin eroge novel/manga vibes that I don't like at all.

... ... ... Dude. My eyes are aching. I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it,  and a truckload if 5* reviews... So,  I've decided to give it a spin,  but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube. I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story,  why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality,  the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value,  as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.

One of those story where every move of the MC gets sneered at,example buying medicine why are you here you can't afford this medicine MC proceed to slap them in the face with his money, even he is just walking someone will tell him how weak he is even after MC show how strong he is in the previous fightIt is still readable but if you don't like the first 10 chapter then its not your cup of tea.

I've read almost all chapters now and currently am at chapter 111. I finally decided to do a review, since I have some things to criticize. And although I wanna point out those mistakes and let it look like I don't like the story, I definitely recommend it.1. Writing Quality (3 stars): I hesitated, because I actually wanted to give this 2 stars, but decided on 3 stars at last. Firstly, I hope I'm speaking here for other readers too, I want to point out the arrangement of special characters. The author writes for example xxx , xxx. I think this somehow breaks the "flow" I'm in when I'm reading. I'd rather have it like xxx, xxx, since there's no gap between the first word and the comma. When he's introducing new cities and rivers, etc., he writes ' xxx '. I think that it's the same as before and should be 'xxx'.It's a similar case with the direct speech, as he places gaps between the word the : and the " and the next word. I think it should be written xxx: "xxx.Secondly, there's a thing I've recently noticed which is that the author capitalized the word ill in the middle of the sentence. Sometimes even names are written in completely lowercase letters.Thirdly, the overall grammar is a bit bad and I sometimes need to correct it myself, because otherwise I wouldn't understand what it means.2. Story Development (4 stars): I like the development of the various characters, since it's pretty solid. However, I believe that the author made it unrealistic. Ronan, having a 9 star talent, should be much more capable than his brother Percy who has a 6.5 star talent. Ronan has the best talent one can possess and can't reach Percy. Though I can understand the fact that Percy wants to be stronger than Ronan as long as possible, the latter also pushes himself, because he wants to surpass the former.Another thing is that while Ronan was inside the cave of penance, Percy didn't train and as they both meet they're suddenly the same level?For me, the most powerful talent should be much more superior to a 6.5 one.3. Character Design (5 stars): Though the explanation on how the characters look isn't really that detailed, I don't have any complaints.4. Updating Stability (4 stars): He regularly upholds his stability, but sometimes doesn't upload a chapter. Though that is indeed the case, I can understand his struggle and don't blame him.5. World background (5 stars): The world background is being told by the author and I got no complaints about it. It probably is the best category here and is very detailed compared to them.I hope my opinion helps others and was interesting to read. Before I tell you goodbye, let me say it again: I do recommend this book despite all these "mistakes".

This novel is my favorite by far and never fails to put a smile on my face with how silly it can be. However, when push comes to shove it can really hit you with the feels. The author lulled me into a false sense of security with the lighthearted comedy but as things develop I become increasingly worried that things will end in tragedy. But without stakes and a realistic possibility of loss how can you truley have a tense situation.

Whose book is this? Looks amazing! You should definitely check it out! I bet you the author is super smart and handsome.*cough* anyways, I hope you will enjoy my novel. I'd like to believe that I am bringing something new to the table with Project Eden. I pieced together many genre tropes and created something that I hope is interesting and unique. Regardless, I am having a blast writing this story. I don't plan on dropping it any time soon, so please show your support with that sweet sweet powerstone! Also, I will make it my life's purpose to upload two chapters a day, but that doesn't mean there has to be no more than 14 chapters every week ;)

Haha don't know where to begin with this one. A very fun read with a plot that is still developing at the point I stopped reading. Humor is the driving force in this one with some terrific banter and dialogue coming through with the zany character interactions. I especially enjoyed the prologue chapter with the FBI-like group of aliens meeting to discuss some concerning events. Very well-written with great flowing prose. This is one talented author with a very vivid imagination at play. I've added this to my library as I have to see where he goes with all this. Anybody thinking about reading this, give it a go! You're guaranteed to have many laugh out loud moments!