The Alpha's Rogue Luna

This book makes me want to rip my hair out, it was good at the start, but then there is a 12 year time skip. After the skip the story isn’t nearly as entertaining, and the chapters keep repeating and retconning things that just happened. One chapter will end with x character being knocked out in a room. To them have the next start with the same character outside prior to being knocked out except this time they don’t get knocked out. Or they will be going to the capitol for a ball “in a few days” to then not go to the capital right away, and when they get there they go “we have to leave because we don’t want to be near the royal family.” It’s stuff like that, that really kills my enthusiasm for this book. Though Mary is very entertaining.

Elder Ming also nodded his head.

"Well two of us wanted to play front right so I felt like watching" said Jerry yawning.

"We just became friends technically we need more time to-"

previous novel is good but is this is best.some new element are present in this novel it makes it intresting. keep going bro.😘

Don answered for the trio. "We were heading into the middle floors to get some experience but then we heard your fight."

This book is very good and looking forward to more chapter.                                                                           

I love this so far I saw you said there was no yandere tag why not add that in to the description I was kinda getting that vibe from her but I wasn’t positive until I checked? I love it though!