Nice 👍 bro keep it up I'm with you and update regularly ..............................................................................................................................................................
I like the story, I think it has good characters that were introduced well. It has good fights, good dialogue, good comedy in certain moments that kind of removes the tension a little.
Hey, author here. So after releasing 100 chapters, I came to realise how far I’ve come in terms of my writing quality and pacing. I believe if you were to read chapter 1 to lets say chapter 40, it’s very different now but with that being said, I’m leaving my review on my novel. I will say that the first few chapters are slow but that’s because I’m introducing the world, their motivations, themes and characterisation. Layla came at chapter 1 but Emery and Zafira came later at chapter 3 or 4. Then atlas was around chapter 10+. It’s slow but I believe it’s worth it. Idk im my own biggest fan and critic. But thank you for reading The Broken Paths. I will do my best in writing and staying consistent.Also I will take any questions you have for me.
Dear Author,Though I haven't read all the chapters yet, but so far it's actually nice. I like the authors originality with his work considering how this is my first time reading with this kind of content, moreover it's not really as often you would find a novel where the MC is a father. I think this also adds to his character. Anyways I love it so I'm gonna finish the rest of the chapters now (u2060｡u2060•̀u2060ᴗu2060-u2060)u2060✧Sincerely, Loki
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