This is a great story that should deserve 5 stars. The issue with it is that the chapters seem to get shorter and shorter but cost the same. It feels like a money grab. Most authors use the authors note tab to leave notices to readers but this story uses the announcements in the actual story to fill out the word count. I read it for the daily limited free which allowed me to make it to chapter 130ish and I started unlocking chapters with coins up to around 270ish. It is a great story but I actually started skipping chapters to save coins because the ones I skipped didn't have much substance to them. It felt like the announcements were equal to 1/6th of the actual story we were getting each chapter.Too bad I would have liked to keep reading but I can't justify spending my money for hardly anything in return.
I like the good representation of a single father. Wise words delving in the realm of discipline and morality. A finesse of pleasantness, harsh deceit, and just enough suspense. The mystery of dreams in a world where destiny and prophecy are common talk. Keep it up, I look forward to reading the rest of this tale.
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