TaleOfAMonster

System:yes

Really enjoying the storyline and the FL is quite funny in the way she thinks 😆 I hope to see more 👍

so far, very strong development in character and storyline 👏

The story begins in a captivating way, drawing the reader in with an intriguing atmosphere full of promise. From the very first pages, it's impossible not to feel drawn to the protagonist's potential for growth, as their journey unfolds with challenges and discoveries. The narrative builds a great sense of anticipation around their development, suggesting that every choice and obstacle will be crucial in shaping their destiny. With such a promising start, curiosity only grows, leaving the reader eager to follow every step of this exciting journey.

Great story author,but you kinda killed it with the whole system thing for me,I mean there's at least a thousand system novels out there and alot of them are prolly better than yours (no offense btw) so I just think it would have been alot better if you hadn't added the system part but nevertheless still a great story 👍Btw,I haven't read your story that far so I may have been a little bit stingy with the stars 😅