I doubt most people need this review but I shall state the obvious things about this novelThe novel us great 5 chapters in and I'm hooked The world setting is made clear but still has parts that make you curious aboutThe updates are fast considering the author has two other ongoing books which you should check out btw I believe we all know the author has good writing quality so i won't need to say anything reallyThe characters were cliche but not that I would complaining since it wasn't a repetitive or annoying clicheStory developed fast but felt normal.Overall it's another great work from one of the large authors in this platform.
I think this book is going to be a very good book to read and i do like the concept and i think the character might be a bit of a passive person even though I haven't read it yet i still think this book will be very good
Filled with small mistakes to the point it's glaring right in the face of reader.From the update dates it appears that Author either posted this novel somewhere else before, made a rewrite(unlikely) or wrote for himself and finally decided to try out by posting it here, as such the update are haphazard at best.The background took unnecessarily too long amounting to mostly filler.Story progression makes little sense.Characters are very two dimensional and I might be wrong, but to me a quite a few characters are evil solely for the sake of being such rather than due to some deeper reasoning.The world background seem to be on a backburner as it appears that author is more interested in keeping whatever story he has in mind going full speed rather than slow down and think from the perspective of a third party such as the reader, leaving most of his thoughts about the story and world as simply that - Thoughts!
The general concept is interesting but to bad it was wasted of this garbage novel.The characters are so annoying in the novel. The story feel like it was written/typed by a 10 year old.
Hello, Welcome. :)For your information, if The Adamant Map has been completed, you can see it as a reference when reading this story.Thank you for your attention.
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