Howcome the FL does not have any character development? She easily falls into schemes. There is not one scheme set up against her that she overcome by herself. She was kidnapped twice. Drugged several times. Assassinated multiple times. She is always saved by the ML. And yet she does not accept him still. She is practically a vase with no use.
his story is nice. We have a lot of good elements, like a nice system, a good combat scene, nice loot. This is a good crafting story.
But we have also a few problems. The MC is alone. We don't really have other characters except for the MC. (talking about adventuree not girls he is sleeping)
Usually on RR when the MC has no friends he is a badass op personality traveling in the wild. But this is not the case in this story. The MC stays in his city and craft. This makes the story tension very low. Author should focus on MC traveling and more world biulding rather than foolish love and his foolish decision.
I highly recommend the author to invest in other characters. This will make the MC personality grow and add complexity to your world.
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But we have also a few problems. The MC is alone. We don't really have other characters except for the MC. (talking about adventuree not girls he is sleeping)
Usually on RR when the MC has no friends he is a badass op personality traveling in the wild. But this is not the case in this story. The MC stays in his city and craft. This makes the story tension very low. Author should focus on MC traveling and more world biulding rather than foolish love and his foolish decision.
I highly recommend the author to invest in other characters. This will make the MC personality grow and add complexity to your world.