"Please, I beg of you, don't do this," I ventured, summoning all my courage. My voice trembled with sincerity, and my eyes pleaded for understanding, imploring him to see reason. "I can't control my desire for you any longer. Your vulnerability, even your tears, only intensifies my attraction," he whispered, drawing closer. The warmth of his breath caressed my face, yet his words sent shivers down my spine, despite the danger they implied. In a situation where a ruthless captor fixates on a young girl, he is determined to possess her, regardless of her resistance, no matter how much it goes against her will."
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Literal b*llsh*t thag makes absolutely no sense. I do not claim to know everything but I know what nonsense is.
And this author. He has a skill in writing nonsense.
While the plot is actually good and the story a fun read. What would need 3 chapters, takes 30 because the author puts filler text, dialogue, and info dumps with all of them being nothing but actual nonsense.
I read by skipping most paragraphs, most dialogues and I still get to understand what is going on because the plot that should move in 1 chapter takes 10 because of all the garbage.
I have never seen a more shameless OR cringe worthy author. They're either utterly shameless for putting filler that has no meaning whatsoever or they're a real middle schooler with 8th grade syndrom.
No wonder this is 2000 chapters. More like 200. Good quality is useless if its flooded by sh1t.
Garbage+3.5/10
But overall both are extremely similar right from the first ch.
I mean, the first ch is same but slightly modified.