The beginning was good, but when characters from the MC's past started to appear the story became confusing, it seems that I skipped book 1 and started directly in the book 2 because many characters from the MC's past appear quickly and without much explanation about them.The MC doesn't really feel like a mage, he just seems like a cultivator focused on spells rather than weapons and that point spoiled the novel for me.The author had a great idea but failed to execute.
I really like this novel and I think the pace with which it develops is good. The plot has me hooked as WELL. Keep it up author. I follow all your novels, thanks for your time and bringing us these stories.
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I enjoy the character descriptions and rank explanations in this story. It's not my usual type of read, but I enjoyed and recommend it. Keep up the good work!
Jenny couldn't speak normal her voice sounds like she'd lost someone important (she did lost someone important) her body was shaking in jealousy and anger
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