Superficial Story

Suddenly there was a faint sound. "hei-hei, teacher is coming."

Have to 😭 but I definitely feel my writing has improved, but is also far from perfect. Just know, I am trying my best to create a great story for you to read :)Thank you so much for checking it out, and if you like it, please add it to collections and add a review. Heck. Leave a review even if you don’t, just let me know why so I could possibly fix it 🙏Despite my triggers, I will let you know, as one of my chapters say- no bad deed goes unpunished. 😡

Rejection is cruel, and I want to feel bad for the mc but he's just too cruel lol. His anger was sort of justified but directing it to the innocent was terrible lol. Good book though

Another journey'  ha...Is this a new year gift or something 😌Well I hope it's as good as other works 🔥.............................................................

This gripping sci-fi adventure plunges readers into a high-stakes conflict across dimensions. The story kicks off with a catastrophic rift in space-time that isolates Space Command’s fleet while unleashing an alien invasion on Earth. Captain Maguire emerges as a compelling hero, blending brilliance and defiance in his relentless pursuit to defend humanity.The narrative’s pacing is relentless, immersing readers in thrilling space battles and intense ground combat. The Sandawana’s journey through the rift and the counterattack against the alien fleet are masterfully detailed, keeping readers on the edge of their seats. The unexpected twist of the alien ground operation and the kidnapping of a senior officer raises the stakes, driving Maguire into enemy territory for a climactic showdown.Packed with suspense, strategy, and sacrifice, this book is a must-read for sci-fi fans craving action and a daring protagonist.

Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Also I gotta say thats an awesome name MANDROID thats catchy as hell dude love it also love thats hes in the midst of a mental breakdown that is damn dark love it Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!