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Like the story so far the only issues is with the constant passing out of the mc feels like the author uses this fact to make time go faster

well this sucks......it sucks that it's not higher in the ranking where it belongs. the story grabs you and won't let you go. while it's been suggested that the MC is a villain atm he's more just reacting to what the world serves him. the romance is a pleasant read and not over bearing. the power level makes the MC strong while not blowing everything from his path and he does take losses from which he grows. really doesn't feel like a first for the author. though....still not forgiving that first death. still hasn't been repayed.....but...it will happen. and I cannot wait for it!

He watched as Jimin almost ran towards the place where his friend was waiting, obviously hurried to attend him in case he needed anything. It was impossibly cute how considerate he was towards the people he cared about.

''Ah! Esquece vamos deixar rolar.

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She nodded her head and they both continued walking until they reached the junction where they will the four of them part ways.

"Visitors, obviously."

"Get a fork and come and eat. In short, come and sit with me."

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

You turned around to see it was the same guy who was talking to you back then and you smiled.

'naneun jigeum galgeoya, Jinjja bian-hae' : ' I'll get going now, i'm really sorry ' - Y/N

Story very awesome and concludes opinion before read