Beginning looked quite promising. Then there was that forced cliche and everything became a mess with the sudden changes, broken plot armors, ridiculous power levels. The pacing went all over the place. That said, I have not read further past chapter 40, but what I got there gives me mixed feelings.
Good day to all my readers, I know my update rate has been disappointing. I know i am disappointed by it toohowever due to certain mistakes i made in this book, i am planning on rewriting it So if you are in favour of me rewriting the story, please comment and if you have any ideas, you would like me to add, please comment as wellthank you
"Today I have turned 18, it feels like a normal day would to me, I was supposed to go to the Niyt castle as we were going to hold the ancient ceremony to strengthen our powers but all was changed due to that day, father and I are going to go to the forbidden land to go hold a ceremony of our own because I was really looking forward to ascending tonight once the full moon has risen".
with out warning he threw the baby up in the air and prepared to slash it in seconds minato appeared in the air and grabbed his son thanks to his teleportation jutsu
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