Sovereign of the Karmic System

I love adventure stories so I thought I would get into this one. Boy was I wrong. For the first 3 chapters he spends trying to get a fruit out of a F--ing  tree. So I think it can't be like this through the whole novel right? So I check the titles of the chapters. It takes him 6 chapters to get to the city 11 chapter to find out about his sister. I mean you know its bad when not only does he spend 4 or five paragraphs describing the characters face. But he also uses needlessly complicated words like sclera and umbra. Could have just said whites of his eyes and deep brown. All in all the set up looked good but action is no where to be seen in first 3 chapter which does not draw me in and make me want to read more. And its toooo looong winded giving the pace a needlessly slow speed making you fell like your drowning in description.

While the writing quality isn't absolute trash, it is quite close to it, there are tons of grammatical errors and ****. ( You'll see them once you start reading. ) As for the characters....
They Are Fucking Autistic. I can't hate them more, they got the IQ of a tomato (probably also share the amount of chromosomes) its actually insane.

Overall not recommended

Lately i've been seeing a few questions amongst my comments, so i thought that i could hit two birds with one stone. Give you guys a place to ask me questions, while at the same time, shamelessly give my own novel a 5 star review. So.. if you have questions, write them here! ^^

The story starts quite causaly, yet powerfully. Unlike most novels, Daniel the MC is not really chasing for power, he has to acquire it in order to keep his home safe, his home well, his friends close. Yet calamity after calamity happens /honestly if I didn't know I would think the author purposely causes those disasters./ Here comes someone insanely creative @SometimesItalk, just when you think he's done, comes the new arc, riding on a meteorite, ruptured by the Dragon king's tail, while fighting an ancient futuristic god, then zombies, lasers, something unimaginable, how does it even make sence. Eh, it does anyway. A few genres pretty well connected.

The character development is really deep and well diffused throught the chapters, you feel like you know those people, there is not that boring moment of walls of text of description of a mustache, yet you know exactly how does it look like, why the character decided to develop a mustache, and guess that he uses the same care as your uncle Thomas. The world is real, lol it is, pretty much as the characters, not being avalanched by plain text, roughly explained making clear outlines of the scene. Just let your imagination work. You will either forget those little details or submerse in there.

Honestly I got past the first chapter pretty hard. What is hard. Well it took me three whole days to read a single chapter.

After that I read a few chapters and really liked it.  Despite it was pretty causal, it had potential, he caused it and he used it. Till I caught up I couldn't keep reading. (ATTENTION : addictive!) The writing got much better, yet it had some gaps and flaws, sometimes misunderstanding, hell which novel here doesn't, it isn't a professional thing. The novel has the potential to reach the End and forth.

@Webnovel itself should assign a good editor and eventually bring this story further. Well it's not close to done yet. (I hole so!) So let's not put the carriage in front of the hobbit.

So in one word, again: Addictive, pretty well written with a lot of passion for the novel itself and the readers. Well this is the best thing here yet not many of the authors use the opportunity to communicate with the readers.

Edit: It is not paid. 😅😂
For sure if you like novels like this, if you don't, if you don't care /surely I don't care cuz it doesn't matter/..

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A good history , i can feel the flow and the MC only made 1 foolish action til now a m a z i n g

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I highly suggest reading this LN. The first 100 chapters a great. After about the first 100 chapters it gets even much better. The story just keeps improving. It is a Great LN and Very well written. The author seems to been about as good as IET (I Eat Tomatoes author of Coiling Dragon, Swallowed Star, and others). This author seems to do a much better job with writing in the MC's friends than IET and other side characters too.

Honestly if the MC was someone else this novel would have been 50 percent better. The MC is a beta *****, just above japanese beta MCs. He has no backbone, no brain and braincells. He is literally unable to think for himself. And he shares everything he has with a few freeloading bitches and parasites he dont need. Literally the whole book is about him downplaying his cultivation speed because he is FUCKING stupid. Literally leave those ungrateful fucks alone and use his system and cultivate for 10 years and he can probably reach Rank 9. But oh noo he wont. Fucking retard. And he lives on the streets as an orphan for many years lmao. He learned NOTHING. He is acting like he traveled straight from Japan into the world lmao. Only anime MCs can be this brain damaged. Otherwise its a great book. FUCK.

In general there's nothing wrong with this novel, it's neither good nor bad and the writing quality and updates seems satisfying, but the mc is nothing but a gopher for the karma system and the method to power up is very repeatable. As a reader I feel the mc and the story is lacking something for me to continue reading, but I can't really pinpoint to what exactly.