All in all. Great idea, terrible execution, and web novel really needs to start quality checking. They're way too many poorly cut diamonds. Because of this there's so many stories that would have been good but turned out terrible, because of either a bad writing habit or repetitive simple mistakes(ect). I especially think they should encourage polishing up old chapters, especially when the writers need a change of pace. besides revisiting old chapters will always a good thing.
This novel is very well written, especially I am very satisfied with the pacing which many authors struggle with which is quite surprising. If you have time and you want to read something refreshing, give it a go.
Posting here as I grew to be liking this novel. Many thanks for the author that's writing this, I find it very amazing in every sense. I am having a great time reading it.
This novel had a very good premise. I love military novels where the MC is a strong general/leader or is a cultivation/system novel paired with military. HOWEVER, it quickly turns sh*t. Cliches upon cliches, the MC is a beta cuck who attempts to r*pe a girl by chapter 9. He has an extremely overpowered system yet decides to slack off. I don't recommend this unless you like ecchi crap.
this is a very good book to read as per previous reviews I can't say much except don't ever stop writing author it is a read and very detailed I do hope I get to see the other chapters 😊
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