Shattering the Luna

Worst ending and poor grammar throughout. Skip this and find something better!

This book has the worst ending.

what the hell was that? who ends a book with an ending like that. that was horrible. grow up and finish your stories. bad reviews make for people to not read your stories.

chapter scary dreams  paragraph 11 what on earth is a pounch/ing is it (punch+pound) you need to go through this story and fix all the typographical errors

poorly written, spelling & grammar issues, very sloppy storyline. repeated thoughts just phrased differently. something that was extremly significant that should have been detailed over many chapters, was glossed over in one. locations and who's speaking jumps constantly. should be free/edited

Yes, I understand that, but in my opinion this one is kind of a exception. I have tried to read others, but I just couldn’t.

can anyone tell me the chapter where they find out mc is female?

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