The characters design, the world background everything are really good. THe emotions of scarlet are very well written. I wish she ends up happily. I love this book man.
i like it. its a novel like The Legendary Mechanic but instead of making use players by becoming an idol our mc goes against players killing/farming them while they are weak to increase his power.
Very good concept, but I can see that author is not really exploiting all the potential yet, it is good to have fights scenes but it is not so good when the fight scene is dragged out and logically it could have ended sooner and carried on but it did not. In my opinion, there is a lot of information that does not matter or affect the story in any way so author should reconsider to make the flow better without boring chapters.
The story is pretty good, the pacing is a little fast and the characters can be a little bland. But overall not a bad read. I'm not a huge fan of how the author does dialogue, but I've seen far worse and it definitely isn't unbearable.
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