Sector Eight (Perimeter Defense: Book #1) by Michael Atamanov

Starts out decent then very quickly takes the tone of the typical nationalism novels, calling China number 1 and everyone outside it barbarians

system ✓fat friend ✓once orphan, now has a family ✓the will to 'save' people ✓the book is good but god bless my soul the peanut gallery is infuriating and annoying

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the writing us definitely off, or maybe it's the translation. it's not really that good and the story doesn't flow well. it's hard to tell who's who and the dialogue isn't the best

Pretty good  read at this point, I'll update when I reach the 60th chapter,  it's really original and a lot better than the other pre-read of this week, hope it's get selected soon.AAAAAAAAQSSSSSSSSSSSQSSAZSDAZDQFQFQSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSQS

The novel is interesting so far, the FL is cute and funny, I love that she has so many family members who love and spoil her, especially her adopted father. It’s just that in some parts of the novel it feels like it was just cut off and those events don’t actually have like a ending scene, im not sure how to exactly explain it. For example, when later FL meets one of her senior brothers again at celebration/party event that his family was planning for him and there after solving a issue that one of the characters who was trying to cause for FL, the senior brother grandfather end up being unconcious cause he was taking one of these suspicious medicine that he had gotten then FL help treat & make medicine for the senior brother grandfather and said that he would soon wake up and then she caught the guy who was disputing those suspicious medicines for the big families, and that scene/event just end just like that there’s no like follow up on her going back to check the grandfather to see how he’s doing,there was just short mention about another country trying to cause trouble with them that’s why they want to get rid of those elders in those big families but there’s like no details about why they’re doing that, who was actually the leader behind it, etc. There’s also a few other scenes/events where it just get cut off without like an ending scene to it before going on to the next event in novel. I do love the FL and her adopted father and their relationship though. There’s also a few characters I don’t like and find them annoying though.The free trial chapters translation is pretty good but the moment you start reading the locked/paid chapters the translation quality actually starts decreasing. There’s constant gender mix up, characters names being switch/mistaken and in the latest chapter (I forgot the actual chapter but it was around maybe 280-290s or so) there’s like a repeat of a chapter and it’s also around in those chapters that there’s also repeated lines too, they didn’t check the chapters to double check to make sure there’s no mistakes before actually publishing the chapters.In every chapter or so there’s always a gender mistakes of the characters that’s constant in every chapters, and also the characters names being switch so you would really have to pay attention closely or re read that paragraph again to make sure which of the character they’re actually talking about.

1. Invigorate body and restores Mp. (For Superior Race).

"Sige maghihintay nalang ako sa labas nang gate" mabilis na tugon ni Zach.