Great work author finally a good lion story but I wish the storyline isn't so complicated so soon with the challenging pride leader stuff , I think the kael should have some level of power first before any face off ofcourse that's just my thinking it's still a great story.Pls 🥺🙏 let the update be stable and fast.
Interesting book written in first person POV. There's a good build up moment which indicates good story telling. The plot may look common at the start but it's got its own uniqueness as you continue to read. Few adjustments, grammar, punctuations and spelling. Fairly technical but can easily be fixed. Recommended to those who like cool and collected MC.
Hi everyone. First time Author here so please bear with me.The action in this story doesn't start until around 45 chapters, your criticisms are more than welcome as they'll help me improve. Thank you.
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