Revelation

Burgundy was surprised by Aiden 's words, but then she smiled brightly and hugged him again. "Thank you, thank you, thank you... "she was repeating the same words over and over.

[Dragon Slayer Magic] - Biaya Lvl.15- MP: Tergantung pada mantra - Peningkatan MAG per level sebanyak 2

[Half-Dragon]

1 question and 1 only      (Does he become a full woman later on ? )

This would be great.  From the synopsis you can tell.

Love the starting point and the way how the flaw and world building goes. Just on chapter 1 a bit slow pacing but if you are a person with good patience, surely you can get a hang of it, especially when the story is well written. That, being said this novel have a great potential with a slight improvement on punctuation, and paragraph placing, with slight tweaks. Everything will be smooth to go. I can see how hard the author create chapters to the story, as it was crafted with care, keep up the great work, author! To more ink!