Returning to the Other World with My Children

This Guy Takes The First Time Of His Step-Sister. The Description Of The Aftersex Is Too Good. It Makes Me Wanna Have Sex Too. Though I'm Always Wanting It. Afterall We All Know The Pain Of A Single Dog.(20 Y/O)

I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable.The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format.I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.

Excellent fight scenes. The fight is actually what brought me in, even though there are a slight bit of writing errors, the author made sure to keep us hooked up with his story. The background of the story is simple and best.But the only thing I would say is that from the next time, make sure you give a slow start to your novel. All the best author.

This is by far the most original setting so far that I've seen on this site. The story is well written and uses its unique setting to add something new to the main plot.

Ning Rong Rong :"Ning Rong Rong level 26 support spirit master, spirit essence seven treasured glass tower."  

I've always loved apocalyptic-zombie novels like this one. The story flow is great, and the characters are also good. Though sometimes, you just want to push the MC so hard that she would see how good her space was because at this point, she hadn't realize it herself; especially that spring. But I am anticipating this realization on further chapters. Uh, and her eating those animals (which was vividly described) was really... how should I put it... I was thankful I wasn't eating while reading this. Hahaha~

Inteligência : 34

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