Its unexpectedly really good. It has kingdom building like Release that Witch, but without harem so far and more detail on the war scene. I heard multiple point of view from human race will took too many chapters. if its interesting like Overlord, it will be nice.
Hello guys. Author here. This is my first time in attempting writing other than my exams. So that's how big of a newbie I am. So if you are willing to give some constructive criticism be my guest. For the people who don't like my story sorry but I'm not sorry. For the people who like the story please drop in a review or a comment that would be appreciated. If I make some mistake please let me know what it is I'm totally new to this. Thank you for the read. I appreciate it.
Can't give a very well constructed opinion because the editor (if there is any) is garbage and I abandoned the novel at 10th chapter. If there is in 1 chapter few paragraphs from the middle also at the end and then next chapters are put up in incorrect order and remains unchanged event when ppl point it out in comments. Sorry but I won't suffer through it. Liked the story until this point tho
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I read until 81 and I quit, this will only hurt my weak heart more. It makes me sad that Alice was killed by the MC, it makes me sad that Alice of everything by a person like the MC. Generally I don't like yuri but now I would have preferred that Alice fell in love with Sun jie and left the MC. Review of a weak heart.
Hello translator, are you willing to translate this? I recently read that novels that aren't picked in the Trial Read can choose to continue to translate it, just like what the translator of Almighty Virtual Game Designer did. But the problem is, they aren't paid. Meaning, translators can only get money through unlocking chapters with coins. There are many (?) fans who are willing to support you, like me, using my other premium account. I very like this novel like others (?) (btw.this is a question: to the translator or fellow readers?
The book has a nice plot and the way you present it to us readers is also approvable. But the problem is your grammar and choice of words. Actually, I'm also facing this dilemma at first as an author, but as days go by as a write I continue to grow. I improve a lot and mistakes are lessened. So I hope you continue this work and also improve as a writer. Good luck!
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