Very nice story, short and sweet, with the perfect amount of pages per chapter. If this book was edited properly I would say it’s perfect, beware lots of grammatical errors. But all in all nice read I’m glad I gave it a chance, very different, good job Author.
After reading the 1st chapter, I am curious to see where the story is going! While your writing appears novice, I look forward to seeing where you go with this!
Read up to chapter 18 seems like a good story but the constant pet names irked me “daddy” “beauty” main character is too fragile it was almost annoying. Good story plot though
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