Reincarnated as Slaanesh in Marvel

The book is well-written. It's very detailed which makes it easier to imagine what the place in the story looks like and what is happening with the main character. It might be a little bit slow-paced but it's quite acceptable since the story is just starting. Upload more chapters and keep writing.

When the author released not one but TWO new books and asked us to support them, we were assured that it would in no way affect the daily updates of MHS. I was doubtful of this politician-like promise as MHS, being a fanfic, earns him nothing, but I was willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. Sure enough, while his other books update regularly MHS has seen 2 updates in 12 days. I could stomach it if the author came forward and admitted to his mistakes, saying that he had overreached - but no, he just neglects his promise and this work in favor of more successful ones as far as I can see. I'm very tempted to go to his other books and one-star spam those with an army of alts, but I'd like to think I'm not THAT petty. Still, I am disappointed to say the least, and I'm sure many of your fans who supported you from day 1 are too.

you still alive, bro? i need moreeeeeeee