This would be a good time for Brendan to find out who's the master mind backing Charlene, finding Dee's mom, is her father alive or not, Brendan's mom living years longer, Dee getting her eyesight back, her having boy and girl twins, they finally get remarried, and living happily ever after.
Story is inconsistent.Ending is badly rushed.MC is rapist. Too many loopholes. My main problem is ending is so bad author rushed everything. Without explaining what happened.Not to mention main villain of this story is defeated by MC of another novel. Last chapter is just HUGE advertisement for this authors other story.Characters are likeable. It's fun read if you don't mind mc raping multiple girls.Story is good until author decides to rush everything.
Good idea. I hope MC can make more interesting props.Good idea. I hope MC can make more interesting props.Good idea. I hope MC can make more interesting props.
I have been bamboozled! This is a harem but without a harem tag! Be warned my fellow daoist who are not controlled by their big brother, this is a sham! P.S Grammar is sickening and plot is eh
So this is the author from a different account.If you have any questions regarding the plot I can answer them, and I also wanna see if people actually read it cause I don't trust that view counter....
Wow! This story is really something. The amount of detail put into the prologue and the description of the fire abilities are really immersive. I'm so excited to read what happens during the fight.
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