Real Magic

Beautiful story line.  Amazing cover.

I see "kingdom building" TAG and  I will support the book

synopsis looks great and first two chapters are in nice development, hope it continues with good development as there are many stories that gone bad because authors had made stories bot readable. hope you won't do like that and give us a good novel

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this story is great do far chapter 25 of actually story but in my opinion is that it would be awesome if us the fans drew some of the evolutions based on the descriptions so all you who are good at art consider this please.

The story draws you in at the first part, and immidately when it starts, potential is seen in this book.                                          

Grammar can be a bit better and the world building can be slowly expanded.There is potential and this novel is pretty good.What is the end goal for this novel? Is it similar to My Father in Law is Lu Bu?

     "Yak! aku sedang bicara denganmu!" tegur Shindong karena Sehun tak kunjung menjawab pertanyaannya. Ya, ternyata sedari tadi Sehun termenung dengan pikirannya yang entah kemana.