Re:Monster (BR)

very racist book. calling black children ugly and making fun of them. I do not like racism Especially those targeting children ...............

I read this and all I can say is the MC isnt developed. He is supposed to be a grown man that was killed by his lover and got a second chance. but instead he acts like a kid, and not some *****. He seems more like a pre****. no hint of maturity. And theres no proper planning of what to do [ he has his goals of wanting to protect family, thats there ] but the actual execution isnt. this should be explored.  He hasnt made any plans on that and rather focuses on his school life.And the MC is a mental retard or atleast denser than a neutron star. 8 yrs of marriage, wife never slept with him and he never got the hint that she didnt even like him, even in his death he said I though u loved me, didnt realise she hated him after she shot him [ what happens in story- unless changed ] And this isnt some **** thing ,,,no they are mature adults and MC dosnt have any mental illness. so he is just stupid. this cant even be passed off as disillusion of a yandere lover cause if she disliked the MC this much why the fk wouldnt u not notice? for 8 yrs? does not make sense.suggestion.. instead of focusing on the the social life, etc focus on the MC himself and his actual planning and execution and use of future knowledge to do things and show this. the planning, execution, process, etc. And try to mature the MC. he honestly feels like some pre t.een rather than an *****. the face slapping moments and him feeling better than kids all way younger than him makes more apparent.I read this couple months ago here...same author?**: that story had a pretty stupid moment where no one recognized him after he cut his hair. and it was soo exaggerated and focused on. the couple chps after the hair cut were all about the people not realizing its him or chicks getting wet over him. so forced. Hair cuts change people , definitely agree....but to this extent where the mother, father and brother dosnt realize? so stupid [ and this is why I remember this bk and am asking whether u are the same author, if u are, do avoid this moment ]-*

The story seems to have a good concept, but the mc is generally pretty dumb and doesn't seem to know what common sense is. Also the grammer even on the "edited" chapters is pretty bad.

It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read.I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!

This is wonderful. it is very interesting and no one knows what would happen next. Emerson and Jenny are too cute together. I really love Emerson ❤️

I have only read the first chapter of this book and it is making sense. I like the way the  author made a twist in the first chapter when he was ready to compensate her and not just being that rude, spoilt rich kid. I love this book maybe because it is a Chinese novel cause I love reading Chinese novel. ❤️

"I've about had it with your LOUD OBNOXIOUS ORDERS!" said Zara through grit teeth, her voice thundering through the skies. "Can't you see that we're already lowering our altitude!? And little Zippy here," she pet the bat's head, "can't land very fast! So GIVE ME A BREAK!"

"I had a fight with Seven from Lei Clan and killed him."(Bai Heng)