Re:Birth Of A God

Overall solid and consistent writing and story. Definitly lives up to its title with a character that isnt afraid to analyze the situation he's in. A promising story from a promising author.

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"Master a report just came in" The scout knelt down, "Lady Maria has finally made her move."

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Yeah, i would have left a long time ago it's just that..where am i supposed to go?

We parked the vehicle behind Harry's as he stepped out into a huge park ate we stood beside him as a few man and women stepped out of doors walking towards him they all wore white lab coated looking like doctors or scientist. One man wore a sharp suit he was tall and older around the same age as harry I assumed but in much better shape. He wore glasses and had dark hair his eyes held darkness and carried himself sharp with a demonic aura. I didn't like him just by looking at him. I didn't like being around him the hair on my neck stood up as my body was covered in goosebumps. He was Satan in human clothing I could feel it. "Daniels pleasure seeing you again." The man shook Harry's hand. " Luciforo the pleasure is mine… now I'm assuming you have completed your research?" Harry asked. Luciforo? He even had the name similar to Lucifer himself now I'm convinced this man was the devil. "No quite we keep running in to a common issue please follow me so that we may discussed it in my lab." Luciforo said as he walked towards the doors. We followed but suddenly Harry called out. "Wait you there." He said as all my men turned around to look at him. I didn't dare turn around. "You, turn around." He ordered me, and I slowed obeyed as he looked at me down and up. "Aren't you too small to be a guard boy?" He asked me, and I remember what Jeremy advised not speaking or saying a word. My heart raced in fear. "He is older but do not underestimate his ability sir he is well trained." One of my men spoke up for me. "I see is that so?" He stared at me. "Daniel's this way please." Luciforo called out with inpatients. And I was saved. Harry looked at me curiously before headed towards Luciforo. "Thank you." I thanked our men and he nodded with a smile. "That was a close call wasn't it?" Jeremy said in my ear startling me near death. I forgot he was connected to my ear peace. "You can see us? How?" I asked looking around as my eyes landed on cameras in the corner of the wall. "Bingo that's how I can see you.. since you stepped in to that place I was able to get connection and hack their security cameras." He explained. "That's good keep your eyes open." I said as I quickly followed Harry and Luciforo. They walked through bright halls with so much lighting and then what I saw next made my heart skip, a cellar with so many people locked behind bars and treated like animals. "As you can see these are our fresh catch we will start testing right away." Luciforo spoke to Harry I looked at all the woman and children behind bars they looked dirty and tired as the children reached their hands through the bars for help and cried. I wanted to cry they were reaching for me to save then. "Stop shaking Honey you might be seen close your eyes and don't look." Jeremy said to me as if noticing my obvious bothered demeanor. I bit down on my tongue to distract my mind. There were children no older than junior and woman as old as a grandma. Men of all ages all cramped in each cellar. There was over hundred of people down here. It was like jail, but each cell held over 20 or more people camped together with no space to move around and the smell was strong and horrendous. "Now follow me and I will show you the progress." Luciforo said as he scanned his hand on a pad on the door as it open. We all went silent as soon as we heard screaming and roaring. It sounded like wild animals on a rampage as we all quivered. "What is that?" Harry asked. "Those are the failed subjects they will be put down soon...unfortunately that's the progress of our research." He explained.  But I was scared to the core, how could any human make those sounds and noises I was terrified. "This place is a nightmare." Jeremy said with shock. I wanted to ask what he saw but couldn't say a word. We walked in and stepped in an elevator as it went up to the 3rth floor. As soon as the doors opened I was shocked to see a scene right out of a movie. A lab a massive lab with all sorts of a science laboratory tools and test tubes with a purple liquid bubbling and brewing in every jar and tube. So many scientist people working. "As you can see we are sufficient but unfortunately we have not succeeded we have come close very close but Harry we are running out of test subjects...there's only so many homeless people we can use and most already have health issues. We can't continue to kidnap...too many Missing people report is raising awareness we need healthy unwanted people." Luciforo announced.

Iroko's lips formed a small smile, "That woman... she is starting to feel her presence. She'll be able to tell where Micah's sister is... soon... Just give it a few more years."

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