author fckd up there feelsbadman BUTthis morning i was still thinking it was not a smart move and not worth at all but that was alli have to say that u guys are probably mentally destroying himlike " greed " ? Why don't I see this so called greed ?the author just didn't think of the consequence and made that move to fast, opening a patreon could have made him earn way more and to cut all possible future readers from coming. how can u even say he was greedy ?and even if he was i dont think flaming him that much can be any usefull never understood why ppl flame authors who stopped writting as if they owed u something lmao, i just say unlucky and tell them gl for their futurebtw this case is not comparable to baisiwa's case
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It was good but a lil lacking but the story base was good. It world be good if you keep up the good work. Since this is your first work it might be a little down but youβll get better with time so just hang in there.
"As a proud Saiyan and our child you are no mere Low-Class Saiyan for the blood of one of our ancestors, one of the greatest of ancient Saiyan warrior champions from Sadala also flows in your veins and you bear all the distinctive marks of her chosen descendant. In time we know you will eventually awaken your unique bloodline but to keep you safe we suppressed your potential and hid your mark as one of the bearers of the [Legendary Supreme Seven Thunderbolts of Power], from the forgotten legends of are people concerning the [Legendary Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan God] so that you could grow up in peace despite looking different from everyone else even if something was to happen to us." he finished solemnly as he let go of his wife's hand and placed it around her waist, the shadow of unshed tears of love and pride for his beloved daughter near the edge of his eyes.
"Hyung, aku.. Aku mencintainya.." tangisnya pun pecah. Tidak hanya dirinya. semua bodyguard yang ada disana juga terpancing sehingga tidak mampu menahan airmata. Siwon langsung memeluknya. Ia dapat mengerti itu.
" UUUUHHH " Mesa's mother screamed. On the other hand, Mesa grabbed a knife from the table and charged toward the man who shot his father. However, the moment he reached the man, one of his lackeys kicked Mesa as hard as he could. Mesa sent flying near his father's corpse and lost his consciousness.
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