Please! Marry Me!

I'm new to the book and am finding it quite entertaining.  I hope it is the type he stands up for his wife at all costs, hate when rich powerful men act like  cowards to mommies or the other woman so to speak

I agree with Blyth, make up your mind already-- second thought, can totally hear that them in my head, just like Star Wars and Jurassic Park. Coincidentally I think all were created by John Williams.

ufffc

I closed my eyes and gritted my teeth finding it hard to say but I had to. "Alright, where am I following you to?"

"That's right, and I will drag this creature out of your body."

I mean "got"

Yeah, it's dropped many years ago

This is from the same guys who did Nano Machine hope it's good

I'll comment later..I am in the hospital my younger brother swallowed a 16GB memory card and he is singing all songs in it.I just pray it doesn't reach the video folder.

Funny to see when the protagonist, of a novel thinks that blessings are curses really liked the first chapters. Author keep writing! Don't you dare quit!

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First of all thanks for all the hard work. lets star by basics:Writing Quality "4"- Its good to see all author comments inside chapters its funny it suits the story well. Grammar is nice and it keep you to read all that u actually wrote and not just scroll trow it like in some other novels your`s actually keep me to read it normally so that big plus.Stability of Upadate "4"- Would be nice to keep it stable of 7chap/week but its proly hard for you with school and other irl stuff so i wont say much just that i would be nice to see more chapters :D <3Story Development "4"- Its a cool concept of cultivation in modern time with a sprinkle of comedy and you`r combing it quite nice.  Keep up the good work with that.Character Design "4"- Would be nice to see more complex or more depth characters. But still your doing nice job for now and i like it.World Background "3"- Cant give more for real. I will for sure give more later on when more things are introduce but still imo you should put more job in this place. Ill give some examples: You named the universe and realms and i know we will find out that later on but still is he now on planet or some pagoda flying in space? All i recall reading he woke up after leaveing earth but i dont get where is he now. I know its his master place but is it a planet or spaceship ;D Maybe i missed it somehow not sure. Also try writing on paper make a map of a world in ur mind. The with that u can see background of things more stadly and work on a story from that point of view. It will be maybe easy`r for you to move from there if u got blocked. Tho imo your doing really nice job for now and i really like the book. For everyone else who is reading i give big suggestion to start reading this novel if u havent and support author somehow . Its damn good read and its really nice change of pace of common  MC type of OP/EZ KILL ALL etc... this one is damn special and amusing and i like him alot. Keep up the good work man ;) Best regards Salcho