Persuit of martial arts

I understand the need to have struggles for the mc but making him fail his cleaving his meridians after making one way for him to do it is crazy! Author makes mc struggle to much just to get one powerup. It makes you think that no matter what happens in the story with his talent he’l always be beneath what he should already beOther than the part about the mc having to struggle with every breath and no break the novel is fine. World building is great!

Not a “professional critic” or anything like that, just a guy who enjoys reading interesting, unique and, sometimes, even cliche stories.Overall, I enjoy the time travel and/or reincarnation trophe. I like the characters and the layers between the real world and the virtual worlds. The main concern I have overall is the introduction of Draco’s background. I thought that it was a big info dump as well as the idea being revealed way too quickly. Obviously, with that info dump done, the plot starts to progress and the motives start to reveal. But I wish that it was introduced more subtlety and revealed better.Thank you for the story though! Although I’ve finished it and there are some rough spots, the writing style and ideas are very enjoyable!

This is not a review. This novel shouldn’t be #1 in ranking atm. I see lots of spam 5* reviews and thank goodness others are noticing the BS. Whoever is spamming powerstones on this with multiple accounts, shame on you. What benefits did they give you, please do tell. Then again Webnovel might be engaging in shady work bumping this to #1 also. Only takes a few clicks on a keyboard for them i bet.

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