Peritinere

loving the new update plz update asap plzz

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about chapter 112, there is a huge story gap. seems to be missing a few chapters of info

Pretty incredible work here, especially for something so early in. I primarily have nothing but praise for this novel, I mean, I binge read it faster than I do most else. But really this story has had such an incredible progression, the writing quality feels top notch (for the site), and it just feels like this is the start of something great.My main positives:I love the pace here, MC progresses fast, maybe a tad too fast at times, but never too slowOnly 230 chapters in and the scope of this world already feels so vast, and if it’s properly explored, will be incredible (SERIOUS props to author on this).Cool enemy and game design and great setup for many future plot lines.Those are the just the huge positives but there is dozens more, now here’ just the most minor of qualms:Slightly concerned about introduction of unused characters, some of them are awesome,but many feel as though they’l serve a purpose and never be seen againMC hasn’t a ton, but I do suppose this can be excused considering there’s quite literally a trait on his soul dedicated to seeking his revenge :P.Anyway, short for time on this review but INCREDIBLE job, can’ wait to see where this goes!

ah I see your monkey as well................................................................................................................

If you are looking for a book with thrilling and heart felt experience, then you have reached the right book. I especially loved the second volume

The story is great! It has a lot of potential into it! I think this is going to be awesome in the future! So far, after reading the first few chatpers, I believe this novel is amazign!  I commented the things that I think needs editting!I'd like to note that the events felt a bit sudden. It would be fantastic if you could establish the narration first before placing the system. Let' say that the man was weak, like you've said, author. And in that world/village, violence was always the key. Survival of the fittest. Therefore, he needs to do something. It would be better to explain first the situation he was into. Let the thug beat him up. Show the main protagonist he was not meant to wield a gun, but in the end, he was the "top gunner" in the story. In that way, you can make the story more interesting! feel free to disagree, and these are only my suggestions~ Kudos for the author!

hahahahya i have not read the book yet but the synopsis is top level. here is 5 star from me. Please dont drop the book. I will definitely give it a shot.