Pelangi Disenyum Mu

This is so disappointing. I loved the concept but the Mc's personality is just🤮. Even if it was a haram novel, I wouldn't mind it but it's just soo fake. Declares love for the his girlfriend one morning only to flirt with two other girls the same morning. It's really sad because I actually enjoy the ability he has.

Ch 1-40 great translation but ch 41 onwards translation takes a dive.Story it's self really interesting seems as if the mc taking the martial arts route in a cultivating world but still reach the peak of the world or so it seems would go. 4.8/5 But the translation ruins the story. The tl wasn't unreadable but name changes of cultivation realms, skills, and names.

Read until chapter 18 and from what I can see, MC, despite having lived till 60, acts like a brash 20 year old with severe anger issues. Granted he transmigrated (which he accepts way too easily considering he had a family) and was then taken advantage of, called a slave and then sent to a lion's den(op brothel). But what broke the I can still read this was how, through the use of a system skill, he brought the madam (not actually her, basically a puppet) of the brothel (sect) that he is now a part of and who 'adopted' him and says, Hahaha I don't believe I can't defeat(push you down, rape basically) you when you're at 1%(power) then proceeds to lose (die) 99 times then says that was idiotic, wasting all that precious training time. I agree that was idiotic and way too forced.Also first girl he f*cked, brothel girl, who he felt bad for so he says you'll be my wife and tells her he loves her after f*cking, with what I saw he doesn't have sympathy or compassion, so was the *** that good?

I gave this one a chance and read the raws as it was quite entertaining at the start but that is also the best part about it. This novel is just frustrating as disasters to the family keep on happening. Dumb decisions and no character development made me drop this novel. Spoilers:There are enemies around every corner, ancient demons and old immortals trying to devour the baby as nourishment but what do they do, just taking walks around the wilderness, foreign cities and even going to secret realms. Why would u take a 6 month year old baby to an ancient secret realm??? Also he starts talking like a grown up after 6 months, scolding his father and other family members(haha my son is such a genius haha, its normal for him to curse me)150 chapters in and the baby is still just a one year old, so no character growth. He sneaked out so he can go to a secret realm in the north where all other forces are at. For what? To compete with others for resources.He has a system and is a prodigy himself that advances almost every other day, so why cant he just stay at home for a few years and train there instead of courting disaster everywhere he goes

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Translator here: its a good story but mtl stops everyone from reading it . Hopefully I can make it slightly better. I am doing this for fun so expect there to be small changes at least ,for example, I could mostly remove the already little racists parts. For any suggestions comment

I like what you have written so far but even more is that you write for yourself, for the story and a personal conviction which turn into an original story. Gj keep it up. I am not giving you a full score because of some issues which started from personal opinion but i don't want to impose as you made yourself crystal clear about it in the description.

Pagkababa ko agad kong pinagmasdan ang sala ng kanilang bahay. Nanghina ang tuhod ko ng mapatingin ako sa center table sa sala. Hagulgol akong umiyak papalapit doon. Mas nalilinawan ako habang papalapit na papalapit. Mas lalong kumikinang ang bagay na iyon habang naglalakad ako papalapit doon. At nagulat ako nang makita ko ang putol na kwintas at singsing na pamilyar sa mata ko.