Otherworldly Saint

Meh juvenile comedy "oi yer a big bloke ain't ya" is not a comedy. Meh "magical realism

First time I've written a bad review on a novel. Don't waste your time on this and just read something else.

I gotta say, the synopsis really tells a lot about the story. It really makes me want to start reading right away! 10/10 great synopsis! Don’t change it, please.

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This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

After finishing the trial read(Gotta go fast), I can say the novel is going fairly good. I can't say it's fantastic; nor can I say it's bad. So far, the novel is centered around the development of the MC's fortress, and the troubles he goes through in building it up. Within the fortress, MC is invincible. The issue is, if he leaves the fortress, he is very weak at the moment. Outside the fortress he will have no power. Only his subordinates will have power, but once they leave he has no control. Characters are alright, they have their own personalities. Some of them do overlap, but I can see development for them that couldn't be done in 60 chapters, which is a difficulty trial reads have.From what I can tell the novel will be fraught with misunderstandings about the influence the MC has outside his fortress's influence. It might get repetitive, but all in all it is an entertaining concept and I enjoyed reading the first 60 chapters. I can see the novel being successful. The writing is stable around the intended concept.I do wish, however, that the author went more in detail on the cultivation systems; at least gave us a glimpse at the skills used and what the MC's body is up to. 60 chapters in and I forgot the MC has a real body.P.S. The cliffhanger on chapter 60 makes me want to go jump off the cliff and read the MTL.

ok i don't like the story write from 3rd pov like 80% of the time I like the story going just not this type story telling its hard for me to really going in to the book when it tell from that pov just to much monologue all the time this make me thing just like a children book my parents read it to me but I'm still Reading it just have to force my self with it??

FULL COPY OF FALLOUT GAMEMC IS TRASH.HIS LOVER FIND HER LOST SISTER AFTER SO MANY YEAR BUT MC RAPE HER THEN HE SAYS TO HIS LOVER THAT HE WAS HOT HEADED BUT WTF..HIS LOVER FORGIVE HIM??ALSO HE BANG EVERY GRIL HE SEE..ALSO WTF ...IN THIS NOVEL AUTHOR MAKE HAN SO GREAT THAT IT WILL MAKE U FEEL LIKE TRASH...ALSO ALWAYS LOOK DOWN ON JAPAN.NO LOGIC.STORY FULL COPY OF OTHER NOVEL AND FALLOUT GAME.MC IS NOT SMART..SOME TIME MC IS SUPER SMART..ALSO A GRIL COME TO HIM AFTER SEEING HIS MONEY..OK MC BANG HER BUT WTF HE ADDED HER IN HIS HERAM.ALSO THAT ALWAYS TAKE ADVANTAGE OF MC'S MONEY AND FAME.HE ONLY THINK ABOUT SEX..DO NOT CARE ABOUT HIS WOMAN..ALSO PLOT ARMON IS TOO TOO THICK..MC BEAT A ARMY OF 1000 WITH 200 PEOPLE EVEN THOUGHT 1000 ARMY HAVE MANY TIME POWERFULL ARMS..ALSO NO POLITIC...AND MC TRUST WOMEN TOO MUCH ..ONLY ONE WORD MC IS LIVING TRASH.DONOT CARE ABOUT HER WOMEN'S FEELING..