The story is def above average.I like the early romance that is in the making (though they might get separated soon so whatever).The power system and world setting is kinda well done, not sure if it's unique but feels fresh nonetheless.
One of the best idol novel I have read for now. The only issua I have with it is that the man lead have no hurdle or obstacles. It’s a way too easy road to success for him
Hm. Interesting yet also seemingly dull at the same time. Doesn’t seem to have enough prospects to be considered a full-fledged stroy and even if it did, I doubt the excecution would be on-point. It’s a real gambit, this one. Mostly depends on where the author wants to take it.
The world development in this story is great. The main character is likeable and not an idiot. Everything is neatly organized into sensible ranks and ratings. The main character is OP and all his servants are OP as well but are using it to the same effect as Ainz in Overlord so thumbs up.
I don't want to bash you in, like the other guy did on his review. i know this is your first novel and your still improving but am gonna have to drop.Your mc is just way to annoying, i really did try and read more, but at this point am just skimming through chapters.(Mc problems)1: The fact the he actually paid for the wand that was disposable was just bad, he could have still made excuses or try to haggle over the wand, you think he would learn a thing or two over haggling because he grew in that type of environment, but no, He didn't.2: Some what the same problem, butcher guy was to ripping him off but as soon as he thought that the butcher guy was helping him with the girl, he dropped everything thing because he thought he was a "man of culture" for helping him with the girl.3: MOST ANNOYING PROBLEM OF THEM ALL! Annoying simp mc, Jesus Christ the first pretty girl that he meets he instantly goes monke mode for her, I can't imagine what would happen when he meets someone like a Princess or a Queen, that look more beautiful than her or some other higher being that's more beautiful.
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