One Giant Leap For Mankind

It is a good novel with nice concept but not my cup of tea. I find a justice spewing extremely serious Saitama to be off-putting .

Hey you thought you were talented with your rank 5 martial spirit? Well I have a rank 6 one so your trash compared to me. Then suddenly a young master with a rank 7 spirit comes by in his carriage and says, men kill these pieces of trash for blocking my way. But as that exact command happens a jade like beauty is seen flying in the sky. People gasp at her beauty and background and say, hey that's such and such from that one clan she has a rank 8 martial spirit. Clearly the carriage young master is trash compared to her. Angered of being shamed in front of the crowd the carriage young master rides away in shame, but at the corner of his eye he sees the MC laughing. Men kill that trash for me says the carriage young master. And so the cycle repeats of the beauty saving the MC causing more problems. That's the whole novel.

I'm pretty sure this novel is at least partially inspired by A Hangman's Diary: The Journal of Master Franz Schmidt, Public Executioner of Nuremberg especially the start of the novel though obviously this is a mystical setting and not a real diary of an executioner. It's like a combination of that and a somewhat interesting twist of a sign-in novel except instead of signing in he executes demons to get rewards. Unsure where it will go beyond the executions. Overall, it seems fairly decent. I think it could have been better if instead of a sign in type system he just gave the MC a cultivation technique that relied on slaughter to cultivate and if you get to a certain level you can leave and join a sect or something. That'd be at least a little more interesting than falling victim to some of the same problems that many sign-in novels have such as getting x number of years of cultivation as a reward. Still it is at least a better concept than most sign-in novels at least at this point.

The plot is really fascinating and the characters are unusual and interesting. The grammar and writing can be improved, but the overall setting, tone and storyline is engaging and impressive. Good job!

Okay it seems I will be the author's first.Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake.Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen.Good job dear... Author!:)

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"Hai Jackson !" ucap wanita paruh baya itu dengan seringaian tipis nya yang tergambar jelas di wajahnya.

Seeing you here wherever I go, maybe I can't handle it. I guess this is perfect chance to leave and forget about him...