It's okay. The translation is just slightly better than MTL in some places which definitely hurts this novel. Fang Yuan, our main character is a pretty good guy for the most part. Give it a chance if you have nothing left to read. Not my kind of story but it might be right up your alley.
Gracias por el gran trabajo hasta ahora y espero que continúes así!!! Me encanta esta obra y espero la continúes... espero actualizaciones más seguidas 😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Revieved at ch10 which had a good character defining moment worth judging.Grammar and structure quality is good enough that it never broke immersion by itself.My main gripe and the main reason for dropping it is the MC. His motivations are solid until they suddenly arent. His father died on the frontlines and left the family poor, so poor in fact that sometimes they wake up suffocating coz they cannot afford enough air. So, ofc the MC wants to not be like him or do the same thing to his family right? Well, thats what we are told but in the defining moment he decides to be heroic and basically does the same as his father. So much for working hard and living long to help his family. But ofc he is the MC so he doesnt actually die but gets saved miraculously. He even gets *rewarded* with a rare item coz he resembles his father while being heroic (a heroic deed which, if he was not the MC, would leave his family of 6 one more member down and ruin all hopes of rising out of their miserable poor life). No regrets and good loot for him, i guess. Furthermore the MC somehow felt like he shows more reaction to his precious gear (mom's life savings) being covered in rotten stuff compared to when that gear was robbed from him(right before a life or death battle, mind you). He didnt even mention the robbery to the ONE justice upholding friendy-ish high level guy he comes across who decides to take him under protection. The cartoonishly evil bully returned the gear (fully intact) after the death battles were over, having only covered them in rotten food. Baffling sequence of events.I couldnt root for this kind of MC or even his opponents.Well, read it you are able to get past that kinda stuff.
So far I’m loving this story - finally an mc that isn’t a beta or a simp- he’s possessive in a good way and is not afraid to kill those who stand in his way - he’s still young thus he still has some growing up to do but he’s making progress - I hope he and his mom start developing their relationship more which seems to be happening. Only criticism I have - which is minor- is that when meeting the new ladies there isn’t any description on how they look like - for a while I didn’t know how anyone looked like, but this seems to be changing in the later chapter - oh and there seems to be too few chapters making it hard to wait for the new chapters to come. Author keep up the good work - can’t wait to see what new powers he gets and to learn more about his passed lives
than Ryuu remember this morning and put on a barear than start moving slowly until Ran screams and said " master faster harder ahh " so Ryuu start to move faster and harder and the room was full of the sound of flash heating flash Ryuu growl loudly and turn Ran on her stomach dogy style and drove deeper inside her and move faster and faster until the came together.
Reaitsu, is spirtual energy the physical force/pressure that a person's Reiryoku creates when released. Most Shinigami, Arrancar, Quincy and Bounts can manipulate the release of their Reiatsu. Bleach etc
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