OCCULT: A Cryptic Love

Potential: AExecution: B-Grammar: D-Cliche Amount: A+Overall: B-Great idea and storyline, but the author ruined by not even TRYING to fix the grammar mistakes. I get not having english as a first language, but for god's sake just put it in free Grammarly or even a Google Doc

Its pretty unique. Elf time                                                                                                        

well this novel is good but its kinda look gay.im not saying that I hate gays but I thought the MC is straight well overall the story is good

The story has lots of potential.   It started with adrenaline pumping action in chapter 1 and it truly was a great reading experience.  I think the choice of 1st POV suits the story well since it's the experience of one person.  However, I also think that there is too much introspection (chap2) that some elements already become repetitive. It's also become slowpaced since he had not met anyone yet and still alone for two chapters.  Maybe I'm just impatient or I have become one since Chapter1 was quite full of action so the expectation was there.  In chapter3 he already met another character and some questions were answered, but only after paragraphs of introspection again.  Just a concerned reminder from one author to the next, be careful not to go to the purple prose territory.  Also try to eliminate redundancy.  All the best author! Keep on writing!

i hate youi hate Ceciliai hate your entire freakin conceptThrew in the towel at chap 45, started skimming chapter after around chap 10, basically skipped entire chapters after 25VERDICT: One of the best authora out here, i just hate your guts, it aint for me

It's a very detailed yet entertaining masterpiece. The flow of events are somewhat amazes us with some unexpected twist. It's like we are being loved by reconnecting to the past yet uncovering some mysteries. This novel deserves a standing ovation. 💕

It's been a while, but here I am.I will not make promises.Thank you for your support and support, especially you readers who insisted on the story.I can only guarantee two more chapters after this, so let's see how things will go around here.The ML is still an idiot, but he will improve. Yes, he should think more about treating women better, but he also has a tragic story behind his imbecile attitude.If I approve of this kind of man ... No, but everyone has their traumas and phantoms they must overcome. I believe in people's rehabilitation.

Even the seven major orthodox clans dare not offend him lightly after a few attempts to get rid of him. And moreover, his evil cohorts were many too.