Nyix

Interesting plot

Dear author, hope you're doing well...(':') waiting for an update

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Tl:dr B- edging into a B. Better then most but still rough around the edges.This is a solid twist on the standard reincarnation cultivation novel. The author's writing is getting better and just about everything from a narrative perspective works just fine.With that said there are some areas which need improvement. The characters and world building are not detailed enough to feel, well... real. The plot moves rather quickly and not enough time is spent to genuinely get to know the characters which are so pivotal to the story. I appreciate that the author isn't padding the word count but more fine details would make the characters stand out from the background.All in all it's a good first novel from this author so expect some rough edges. I recommend that you give this novel a shot and see what happens; it's better then 85% of the stuff out there.

this thing got picked? the editors must be high as a kite.not to mention this is basically a fanfic of the novel and not a translation. since it changes the settings and characters.

First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.

only a copy from legendary mechanic.... ................... ........... ................. ................... .............. ..............

pointing something out. Arthur isn't op he works hard to achieve his goals. everything he does is to survive. you will see how he becomes a great warrior on the outside but in the inside he's broken,traumatized by what he's seen throughout his adventures he'll be going through allot. This is gonna have allot of gore and stuff. this is gonna have a few arcs each one better than the last. I want to say allot of stuffs but it will spoil the story all I can say is if you like adventures,not a overpowered mc, And a book that actually follows the series. there might be a few chapters with bad grammar and there might be good chapters with good grammar. I think on every chapter I write on page 7 I re write that thing 4 times until I found the greatest way to write it. I focus on the pages. I will also introduce some monsters and animals that weren't shown in asoiaf but mentioned. oh and what Arthur goes through is harsh what he does is disturbing.