A man who served his family for most of his life, willing seeks Virtual Reality to escape the pain in his body, and as consolation for his recent divorce.
Ely, an old fart, not young of body, but with a capable, and experienced mind. Not a superhuman, but a broken human.
-Authors Note-
I need to get the blue boxes setup so there will be some revising. Currently am writing from my phone, which is slow but hopefully slows my fingers down enough that i can plan the plot out better. I am trying to develop this into a professional work, which of course ought to be over 50k words. chapters should be 2k -4k words, and i will be making small tweaks and revisions as i go.
No i am not actually as old as the character, but i have broken enough bones to know what pain is like, and have kids.
I will be attempting to make the npc's and players in the story not seem stupid, but rather more fit all the ranges than human kind is capable of. This is an original work.
The comments at the end asking about when the next chapter will be posted are all from 2months ago. Is this it?