Another shop owner type of system novel! I'll give 5 stars on the concept itself and full marks for encouraging the author to not drop it even though some errors have been made.
absolutely loving this one so far, the author makes a great job in immersing the reader with his amazing world building skills as well as story telling. the story flows smoothly without any sort of grammatical mistakes to be spotted. as you read further and further youll fall in love with the lovely, cheerful, and well written interactions. but at the same time the book is not limited to one tone, it can be serious when it has to be, with intense scenes as well as exciting ones.
Only read about 15 chapters till now but I agree with the others. There are tons of trash writers wannabes, writing terrible novels and they still getting 4.2 or more ratings. Keep writing man, you are doing a fantastic job. If I have to find something, I'd say that you do a little better intro, however (at least for now) you are at the top 10 in my mind. Keep up the good work!
Been waiting for a novel based only on body cultivationSo far good novel with small spelling mistakes so the novel need some proof readingAnd kind of on the fence about the MC as the guy attracks too much attention when he should be more low profileWell for now still an ok read compared to chinese novels with the same genre
the novel is good however don't add too many women because this creates poor character development for example the mothers the sister are Rose are fine but Eva and Julie were not necessary because many people dislike harem especially if the mc just takes anyone how ever if you only took since they have a connection the other two sisters were not necessary since they did not like him like rose they were just lustful or you could have made the triplets since it would be understandable due to the bond
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