Myths and Demons

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By the gods, Tirus somehow wasn't hit by those lights and he immediately dropped his shield and ran as fast as he possibly could in the opposite direction of the Gate. He wanted to have nothing to do with this.

The sun already disappeared as the moon replaced it's place, illuminating everything in existence.

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

Too shocked to even move a muscle, everyone is pinned to their place as the torture unfolds. Or was it a cruel public execution after all?

The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad

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slow but good so far.Fights are done well mc doesn't is not dumb .Continue with the good work

this story is quite good , good pacing