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The mc randomly Becomes arrogant, the grammar is awful, and all the mc does is practically Steal money from kids.                          

It's a decent story, but the translation isn't the best. This is an issue fairly often and even interferes with understanding the story at times. This leads to the story being kinda average. I don't know how this placed #1...

Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck.I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael.I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app. You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go! You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards

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Silent sport by void group....Headed by void_king..Btw. A good story after a long time from...my dear country india ...jai hind jai Bharat..

Great book with overall great writing. MC has good chances but isn't overpowered within the first 20 chapters  Can see great potential in this novel and can't wait for more chapters.