Hey you thought you were talented with your rank 5 martial spirit? Well I have a rank 6 one so your trash compared to me. Then suddenly a young master with a rank 7 spirit comes by in his carriage and says, men kill these pieces of trash for blocking my way. But as that exact command happens a jade like beauty is seen flying in the sky. People gasp at her beauty and background and say, hey that's such and such from that one clan she has a rank 8 martial spirit. Clearly the carriage young master is trash compared to her. Angered of being shamed in front of the crowd the carriage young master rides away in shame, but at the corner of his eye he sees the MC laughing. Men kill that trash for me says the carriage young master. And so the cycle repeats of the beauty saving the MC causing more problems. That's the whole novel.
The book is already completed and lots of guys already purchased the privileges. But they stopped updating after one month. Will drop this if they don't update.
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Hidden Gem. It is a great sports story that I am bv happy to have found. I hope the author keeps up the good work. heads Up: The grammar and length area work through but the author has shown improvement. Really excited for more.
Good start, the story seems to make sense so far. There are a few minor grammatical and tense errors but it didn't take away from the feel of the story. It just needs a little editing and it will be fine! I like how the author describes things in unique ways that bring objects or people to life.I'm not a big fan of detective novels but I will keep an eye out for this one! I see a lot of potential! I'm excited to find out how Alistair will solve the case of his parents' death and future cases to come!
i loved the wording of the story. i loved the mix of suspense and romance. i had to wait til the end of the book to give a good review. this is a book to just kick jack anf have fun with.
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