My Hope

"Y-you kno- wh-what, sir?" she suddenly said, "I hat-e y-you, You-you know?"

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

On the outside, I started to search for her.

"WHEREEEEE YOOOOUUUUUU BEEEENNNNN FRIIITTTTZZZZ , I TOOOOUUUGGHHHTTT TODDDDAYYYY YOUUUUU AREEEE GOOOOIIINGGGG TOOO COMMMEEE EEEARRRLLIIEEEER!?"

it's already so popular,, so good novel, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work hoping for the next chapters's

okay, im just going to give a good review because ill give u the benefit of the doubt for the future but objectively this is a 2/5. the pacing is all over the place, the descriptions are jarring. its just very poorly written. i really think you should study the basic conventions of good storytelling if u genuinely have a desire to progress ur writing skills. theres just weird info dumps+ lack of info if that makes sense and things are just well written. please study some more man before jumping into writing. although u might think its great from a reader pov theres just so much that doesnt make sense. def an improvement from ur previous works tho

The writing quality is wonderful. The author has a way with words that leaves you wanting to read more. Expecting great things from this piece of fiction. All the best to the author :)