It is written in an entertaining enough way, but the MCโs behavior is often weird and doesnโt make sense when you consider that he was 18 before reincarnating. My main issue is a bit further on. Stop now if you want to avoid spoilers. His dark magic teacher decides to put a slave collar on him and have him do manual labor for her, while spending nights torturing him with dark magic to build resistance. After of a year of this she also trains him with a spear. Compared to all of his other teachers, who asked consent, and actually taught him properly, he is most grateful to her! On top of that, he feels guilty for being mad at her for the enslavement. I was willing to give it a chance at first but that was the final straw.
Awesome new kind of taste, very refreshing novel please read it people. CKtalon is great translator as always.12345678900987654331Very funny very funny very funny.
Seldomly have i read a story with a worse MC than this. He's retarded. During this first 8 chapters of this story nothing of interest happens and you're getting fludded with the idiocy of this mc.There is nothing appealing so far, I will continue till chapter 20 and maybe update this review.
The translation seems pretty terrible especially when it comes to levels. It is really inconsistent. The idea behind the cheat is pretty good. Personally, I think this idea has potential as it isn't super overpowered and the MC still has to work for his power, but at the same time I feel like it could be nerfed a bit more. As for the characters, they are horribly inconsistent. One minute you have people groping each other in the chow hall and the next you have the author talking about how conservative people are in this world and they aren't familiar with those sorts of things. The author can't seem to make up their mind of the characterizations/world setting which is unfortunate.
Just because the main character is overpowered is no reason to gloss over the moments that make the main character relatable, since the main character is so OP. Instead of focusing on increasing the main characters abilities, flesh out who he is as a person and where he stands in the world. Have the main character reflect on what he has done instead of needlessly slaughtering to get what he wants. Epic moments need to be deserved, not thrown in for the sake of the act alone.
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