This story is just in its initial phases, but the foreshadowing of an intense battle for the MC and his FL (Maybe FL? xD!) had been set in stone. I find the concept quite interesting. Although I'm not a big fan of Sci-Fi stories, I do read them occasionally (albeit rarely). The merging of technology and cultivation are the highlight of this story and I am looking forward to how it will unfold.More power to the author and I am looking forward to Theodore and Turia's adventure in the world that you made.
For hours of hunting and collecting various things, Marina had decided to stop and return. She sent out a signal to bring her back, and while she waits, she recalls all the things gained from this trip.
This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.
want New chapter. story is good author done really good job in while writing and creating charchter.... i usualy like family drama type but they all are the same in most if novel but the way author tell about mc memories has a nice charm to it...the one thing i think can be improved is the fighting. it was quite simiple but i guess it was just first fight hopefully author dont drop this novel and i am giving 5 star so that you create more i love it..
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