Munchkin Oratoria: A Loki Famiglia Story

<p>"Brother... Yuan Zhe?"</p>

You'll never shine if you don't glow

and then after that he gets a keyboard and mixer

the mc is so irritating to me i cant take it anymore im gonna drop it for now and maybe pick it back up few months laters for a second chance to me.. and i hate that he swears too much.

Please review and comment as you read. Hopes you enjoy the story.

Hi great story but 2 much sexinference and immorality. so much violence and gore. very very bad example for my children, But I dont mind reading just to relieve stress. Make this into a trilogy or sexlogy love thanks

You've built the world in the story quite well. I don't know how the upcoming content will be, but Jonas' world-building is pretty solid. However, I think if you do the same for the remaining 24 characters, it might take quite a bit of time. There are a few holes, but they’re not significant. Respect for the effort you’ve put into your story.