Mr and Mrs CEO

A nice story that I would definitely come back to in the future. Usually, I would have a problem with the System in these kinds of stories, but that problem is fortunately nonexistent here. The only problem I would have is with the flow, as it gets somewhat rocky in certain parts. The chapters are also a bit too long for my liking, but that would differ from person to person. Overall, great job!

"ခင္ဗ်ားတို႔က စည္းမ်ဥ္းေတြနဲ႔မွ ေဆာ့ခ်င္တယ္ဆိုေတာ့လည္း က်ဳပ္က စည္းမ်ဥ္းအတိုင္းလိုက္ေဆာ့ေပးရမွာေပါ့"

For the love of god and everything you believe or don't believe in: don't be foolishly swayed like I was by the water army who sings praises to this novel. It starts out decievingly well and has a good premise, and manages to go strong for a little while before brazely dropping the act and showing its true colors.Quick summary: mc is an incomprehensible moron who gets praised to highest heaven as the Supreme Genius Stragegist for having a half-decent/obvious plan once in a blue moon; as for the other 99,99% of the screentime he whiteknights around collecting bimbos in distress, getting his arse handed to him EVERY. SINGLE. TIME., only to be bailed out by unexplained coincidense / "awakened instincts" that are never mentioned again / enemies suddenly gaining a new set of chromosomes in exchange for half of their IQ / convenient moment of luckyness / deus ex machina (this time literally) / plot armor / a random loli that in a single second gains more power than mc ever had and finishes off a boss with a single lvl.1 fireball (yes, seriously).Have mercy on your nerve endings and spleen, just don't read it.

I knew it

Lucas, though had nothing to fear for she was not listening to him.  Her mind was focused on memorizing the exact location of the red blobs.  She pointed to one particular blob in New York.

My first time leaving a review on WebNovel and it’s for a book that isn’t even through its 1st arch (2nd arch?). I’ve quickly gotten absorbed into reading this story and I eagerly wait for every chapter. The writing quality and story development is premium. The beauty of ‘System’ stories (like Isekai) is that you have a lot of creative freedom to build a world while retaining relatable functions/characters that draw you in. Damon is definitely a relatable character, and the believability of his character/story development and the development of the supporting characters is perfect. I’m normally not invested in supporting characters as much as I am in this story, but that lends credence to the quality of the writing. If you are just now thinking of reading this book, then don’t hesitate. It’s dark and beautiful, and you’ll find yourself whimsically speeding through chapters.

This is truly an amazing piece of literature that I have come to enjoy I greatly recommend giving it a read

Love This Book 😍❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🖤🤍🖤🤎💜💙💚💛🧡❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🖤🤍🥰